I need this paper revised and I need about 5 more sources/references added to make it better. I made a decent grade on it but it can be improved in areas. I am including a copy of the graded paper to show what needs to be improved, also I am including the rubric for the assignment, and a template of how the assignment should look when finished.

Each student is be required to complete the term project, which is a 5-8 page (not counting the cover, abstract and reference page) research paper in APA format.

Proofread final paper carefully for spelling, punctuation, missing or duplicated words. Make the effort to ensure that your final paper is clean, tidy, neat, and attractive and is in proper APA format. Be sure to have your final paper ready a day or two before the deadline. This gives you peace of mind and a chance to triple check. Before handing in your assignment for marking, ask yourself: “Is this the VERY BEST that I can do?”

Proof read your paper.

Once you have submitted the assignment it is automatically run through Turnitin.com (plagiarism checker).

This MUST be accomplished by no later than Sunday of Week 8. Late submissions of this assignment will not be accepted.