attached my IMP1 Assigment

and this is my touter feedback

Feedback from Reconciler Given after submission of IMP1

How well did your work meet the IMP 1 criteria?

• A reasonably good attempt has been made at addressing the assignment brief. However, there are a few issues that if addressed, will improve the work.
• In the first instance a closer alignment with the requirements of the assignment would have been beneficial.
• The work is somewhat descriptive and requires greater critical analysis.

please add 1000 word in the assignment on feedback point mentioned