Need someone to fix my paper, the teacher came back and stated a little was going on she couldn’t understand with words and here is the notes she gave to fix the paper so please fix it to these bullets thanks here was the original requirements and below that are the changes i need to be made

(CHANGES THAT NEEDS TO BE MADE)

1. It is very difficult to read the paper. The word choice, structure of

sentences, spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes need special attention.

Please use not complicated, not half-page sentences because it takes 5

times to understand the meaning.

2. Part 2

(relation between the theory and the problem) needs to be bigger. The

example i provided you in class had 3-4 pages. Specifically, don’t

mention much about the problem in the first part, use it only for

theory. And then, in part 2 state the problem and show how it is

connected or can be explained through the theory.

3. Part 3 needs

to be precise and to the point with some evidence; the solution you

propose gets immediately lost inside all the information you put after.

By the end of the paragraph, as a reader, I completely forget what you

actually proposed, because of all the somewhat irrelevant information

you put out there.

(ORIGINAL DIRECTIONS)

Write a paper concerning a contemporary American criminal justice issue using a criminological theory of your choice to explain the issue. A thorough explanation of the theory will be necessary as well as how it relates to a contemporary criminal justice issue. A solution to this criminal justice problem has to be offered by utilizing the theory.

Part 1.
Detailed explanation of the theory. A person that does not have any background in criminological theory should be able to read this section and come away with a basic understanding of what the theory is about.

Part 2.
Relation of the theory to a contemporary American crime issue. How does the theory explained fit into a contemporary crime problem? (Example, Problem A can be explained through Theory B such as Condition 1 meets Condition 2, where there is an Outcome 3)

Part 3.
Provide a solution via or using the theory detailed. MAKE SURE TO NOT JUST MAKE UP SOLUTIONS BUT FIND THEM THROUGH RESEARCH AND DATA OR PROVIDE PLAUSIBLE SOLUTIONS SUPPORTED BY RESEARCH.