I did homework but the professor gave it to me again and he wrote ( No research? ) and asked me to do it again.

I need help to improve the paper.

The assignment was :

MOTION PICTURE QUALITIES

VIEW TWO MOTION PICTURES. ONE OF WHICH WAS HIGHLY SUCCESSFUL AND ONE OF WHICH WAS NOT. TRY TO IDENTIFY FACTORS THAT CAUSE A MOTION PICTURE TO BE SUCCESSFUL AND NOT SO SUCCESSFUL. CHECK OUT THE REVIEWS FOR BOTH MOVIES ON THE INTERNET AND TRY TO SUMMARIZE WHAT THE REVIEWERS SAY AND COMPARE AND CONTRAST THESE REVIEWS TO WHAT YOU THOUGHT WERE FACTORS THAT MADE THE SUCCESSFUL FILM SUCCESSFUL AND THE LESS OR UNSUCCESSFUL ONE NOT SO SUCCESSFUL.

Thank you

Note: The class title is “Experiential and Entertainment Marketing”

I choose two movies ( “Maze Runner” and “La La Land.”)

He asked me to use viewers’ review, and use these websites :

https://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/la_la_land

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt3783958/

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1790864/?ref_=fn_al_tt…

https://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/the_maze_runner

My paper in the attachmnt